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Aug. 1, 2007 [Editor's Note: This is the third of many 6th-grade student essays I will be posting in succession. The essays were written in response to a standardized topic prompt: "Tell a story about how you found a box of treasure." The students had two hours to complete their essays, under testing conditions. This one is a particularly fine example, written by a young lady. Enjoy!] ![]() Emma gradually lifted out of her peaceful sleep, the slicing feeling that something was wrong tugging at her shoulders. Reluctantly she pushed off her soft comforter, and for a moment bathed in the sun’s beautiful light. Her eyes slowly made their way over to the open bedroom window, the crisp, gentle breeze silently soaking her room with the feeling of fun and freedom that summertime brought year after year. She gazed at her set of antique quill pens, which in the breeze looked like dancing birds. She had inherited them from her loving grandmother, when she had passed away five years ago. Emma still desperately missed her, and she wished with all her heart that she was back in her life. She sighed, the feeling of familiar sadness invading her. She gazed at the window once more, and simply sitting on the dusty window sill was an old, crumpled scroll that seemed as though someone threw it on the ground and stomped on it. It reminded her of the crumpled-up tests that littered the recycling bin after a big test in school. Emma shuddered. Just the thought of going back to school and sitting through stretching lecture after lecture gave her the chills. She was sure glad she wasn’t there now! Emma sat up and, in a flash, darted over to the window like a rabbit being chased by a fox. She gingerly picked up the scroll and unrolled it. It read: Tonight you must
complete a very important mission.
You must go to the Emma’s mouth hung open in awe. What did this mean? Who was it from? She had no answers, but she knew one thing. The part about “vital consequences” seemed rather unpleasant, and she knew she was going to be there at the dark cemetery at midnight. Emma trudged along the path, her once moist mouth as dry as
the desert ground, her breath short and quickened. She was hopelessly afraid and worst of
all—alone. Emma was on her
way to the She stopped, took a deep breath, and didn’t stop until
she was at the entrance of the Emma gasped. On
top of the ashes was a beautifully carved box. She opened it up to find an assortment of
nearly every jewel that existed.
She smiled at the sparkling jewels, her smile cutting through the
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